I can see people filling other peoples buckets.
I can hear people on the playground laughing.
I can feel a hard rugby ball in my hands.
I can smell my delicious lunch.
I can taste my nice yummy sandwich.
Attending GTS makes me feel proud because this is the best school.
Hi Jaydon I'm looking forward to your next piece of writing because I can see some great use of descriptive language in this poem. Can you think of another word to use instead of nice so that your readers can understand why you think something is nice?
ReplyDeleteHello Jaydon,
ReplyDeleteGood effort in your sensory poem, Jaydon you can come with interesting words in your story next time.
Keep blogging! :)